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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to apply for the position of Analyst in the
-Investments department of Blackrock. When I first heard from Blackrock
-as a leading investement company.
+Investments department of Blackrock.
I am confident that my academic background, my experiences and my qualities are
ideal for a job in the in Investments at Blackrock. Through my intership at
Starcom MediaVest Group, I acquired strong leadership and communications
skills. While working there, I took the initiative to combine the group's work
-in a PowerPoint presentation and present it to the client, and successfully
+in a PowerPoint presentation that I presented to the client, and successfully
managed to convince him to stay with Starcom for another year. My
-communications skilled were later reinforced during my master's in strategic
+communications skills were later reinforced during my master's in strategic
marketing at Imperial College London, which was heavily based on group projects.
Yours faithfully,